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Bernstein differed because expanding franchise would negate need for violent revolution promoted by Marx.
Some of you are having difficulty w thesis. Many of you are just responding w a bunch of different tinkgs and not keeping it focused. You have to keep it focused because each of the thesis POINTs you make represent a theme which will be addressed or argued in each of you body paragraphs. I'm going to first include a generic assess prompt that should be easy for you guys' to get. Then, i'll give you the the thesis that I think would work best for the AP prompt i gave you .
“Assess the validity o the statement……YLHS is an awesome hs.”
Yorba linda High school is an awesome school due to it’s dedicated and hard working students(w/inhere, you could talk about the various clubs, NHS, or AP courses) it’s commitment to ensuring all kids feel welcome( the anti bullying stuff we do, the Link Crew, renaissance assembly) and it’s excellent extra curricularprogram (boys and girls’ champions sports, Mock trial, and theatre awards) HERE is OUR thesis::::
“YLHS is an awesome school due to it’s dedicated and hard working students, it’s commitment to ensuring all kids are welcome, and it’s award winning extra curricular programs.” BOOM. Short, sweet, direct, to the point.
The Prompt for our AP LEQ was
"Discuss the ways in which European Jews were affected by and responded to liberalism, nationalism, and anti-Semitism in the ninteenth century." Jews were affected by the Emancipation Acts, the new ideas on blood nationalism coupled with questionable science, and will respond by seeking a Jewish homeland
for point one--talk about how jews benefited from the emancipation acts how things changed for them (good or bad), two blood nationalism (you could talk about latter 19th century was obsessed w scientific explanations regarding natural selection, race, blood, etc)and then speak on Zionism.